Monday, November 17, 2008

Yume (Dream)

6 comments:

Dustin Potter said...

Some really nice editing and good use of sound through out. Could use a little bit more of a story to flesh it out, but it looks good. I think you might want to lose some of the ambient audio (opening the door, etc), your music does the work. A few shots were a little overexposed.

Madison said...

the music was a really nice touch. i especially liked the end when you realize it's a dream. the window shot was way too bright though, that was the only thing that bothered me. other than that, this video was really great. nice work.

jacqueline quebec said...

The video was neat. the music went well with your movements and you had really good shots. good editing.

Unknown said...

I really liked the music, it went well with the video. you had some really interesting shots in this. great job!

maryann said...

The music is really repetitive and there were some moments that it really should have changed. There were some great shots in this.

Austin Luther said...

good use of sound, the editing wasn't bad either. Altogether a very nice film. Some shots were a little too overexposed though