Monday, September 29, 2008

video journal 2

9 comments:

Dustin Potter said...

The opening shot had a lot of promise. Your character looks like he's up to no good at all. I'm not sure what the story is though and the dialog doesn't explain much. More angles would definitely help keep the video interesting; the back of his head diverts focus from anything else. Also you had some really hotspots in the hall shots. I'd love to see you use your subject in a more comprehensive story.

ridgerat89 said...

i thought that he was mad or something and he was taking his anger out on the bubble rap or he was going to piss off Vandassa with it but then i don't really know what happened. i was kinda confused.

Unknown said...

I really liked the opening shot, but then everything else after that seemed a little random so im kinda confused. i liked that u used a lot of angles but it would have been better if it had a better storyline. i still thought it was interesting tho.

jacqueline quebec said...

Like other people said i thought the opening was good, but after that i lost interest. Go with the idea, but make it have a story line to it. Maybe he's mad and goes around annoying people. Good idea though.

Madison said...

Ditto. I think this video could have been a lot more interesting if you did more with the story.

maryann said...

I didn't fully understand what was going on. I think it needed a little more focus for what was happening. the angles where good though.

Austin Luther said...

i liked the concept but a little more could be added...FILM OUTSIDE OF PRESTON! other than that the beginning was very interesting

Ted Cadieux said...

Not sure whats happening here.

Bubblewrap?

leaves me confused.

phil sadewicz said...

I dont understand the story at all. is he mad? is he trying to annoy people? what is going on?