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7 comments:
I don't really understand. was it your intent to just show industrial equipment? or am i missing something. if it was intentional, id say maybe you should try and show something more, like an idea, or some content.
a good video, i liked how you finally got outside to shoot. Good choice for filming farm equipment, but, there could have been a little more added to it...
I'm confused about the narrative introduction; I feel ready to accompany you to where ever you're going, but then you show me slow camera movements that don't feel personal. The location looked interesting and you could probably do a lot with it, using only a simple narrative. It felt very last minute and could use a lot more conceptual backing. I'd also avoid the abrupt ending and unnecessary dialog.
i like the camera angles and i think it was a good idea to use farm equipment. i feel that the video should of had more content. but other then that i really liked it..good job.
Good choice to do farm equipment. Could have slowed the panning down just a bit. Maybe a little more videoing taping in the car.
I liked the beggining. I think you have some nice shots of the tracker but I think some of them are really blurry. I think the camera should have been steadied a little as well.
I didn't really get "industrial" from this. You could also do without the first scence of the power lines all together, it doesn't fit with the rest at all. Good job on panning though, but I think a different location would have made this a lot better.
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